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Great painting! 50 hours?! I would have either given up or... died. Probably died. That's like more than a full work week! You've got devotion, that's for sure and it payed off
There's a bit of the '50s in that car. Left hand (fingers) and the Chelsea boots are a little off, but who doesn't have trouble with hands and feet?
as far as the hands go yeah.. I totally see what you mean, should've spent a little more time on that hand. Like you say hands are tough! But you've got a pair of your own so there's always reference! The boots are Jodphurs, I assume they are a lot like chelsea boots. I had such a difficult time picking between boots and "adidas race sneakers". I'm glad I went with the boots in the end. I feel the entire "Bottom" pose is off, it just feels weird. Would've been nice to have shot some reference, maybe next time.
The length and thickness of the left hand's ring finger need to be increased a smidge. Also the knuckles should form a gentle arc with the middle finger's knuckle as the low point. For some reason hands always stick out, but the issues are small. The bottom doesn't look weird. The the pose seems consistent overall. I like how relaxed she looks. The right arc of her left (our right) toe box is a little shallow so the front of the boot doesn't look like it has quite enough volume/width. Her right toebox (our left)doesn't match up with the angle of the ground. What you might be seeing in the bottom part of the pose is the foreshortening of her left (our right)thigh. The angle (curve) just above the knee is a little steep.
Those things are really tiny. I had to stare at the pic for a while to pick them out. My initial impression when I saw this was "cool". It's really bright and airy. Colors are perfect. I get a lot of group notifications and rarely click on them, but your pick drew me in. Some pretty sick details. Love the mirage effect in the distance and the weathered metal of the trash can. Keep up the good work